One of my stories....

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chapter 1. The begining of the end and the truth

It was a horrible night in the life of a young girl..Her name is Jane and she is 16 years old.
In that night she lost her parents an her brother.They were killed by a weird creature (this is what she remembers).
Now she is adopted by a mean and crazy family.That family was made by two insane scientists,who at first begins to make dangerous tests on the girl.The first test didn't make her any harm but the second one.....sent her in a strange world,full of darkness.Jane was scared and she didn't knew what to do ''i must find a way to return home...i must revenge my family''she thought.She found some clothes in an old box..She dressed up with some negru shorts,an red belt,a black t-shirt and with her red hair catched in a lovely tail.Now she walks across those strange streets looking for someone,but she couldn't find anything.
-I must enter in this house!she said.I hope it isn't haunted!
She walked in and she saw a boy...''it looks just like my brother..tall,with brown hair and blue eyes.It could be him?' 'thought Jane.
-Mark,is that you?
-Yes,my dear sister. .it's me.
-But how is this possible??? I saw..i mean i remember that you were killed....
-No,Jane,i wasn't.The thing you're remembering is not true....someone wanted you to see that..it was an illusion..
-But who?why?she said
-I know,but you must know the truth about you and our family...but first sit and i will tell you..Well,a long time ago there were two peoples and they had strange powers.They were our grandparents,but that creature you saw killed them.Only our
mother escaped.She was a child of 4 years.She grew up alone and met our father in a fight with those creatures and they
fell in love.But dad has a big secret.He is not a human.
-What??!!?You talk serious?I can't belive it....sorry continue..
-As I was saying our father is not a human being,he is one of those creatures..he is an akarian..
-You are saying that he killed our grandparents?How could he do this....(but Mark stopped her)
-Stop...he tried to stop this crime,but he couldn't.Now i will continue...our mother and our father got married and they
borned us.But now dad's family wants to kill us and our mother and get back our father as one of them...here in this world.
We must find the Ancients ones,they can help us to go back in our world and to save our family and they can teach you
how to use a spell.
-I'm......I don't know what to say...what are your powers?....but mines?said Jane.
-i have the power to transform myself in different creatures and i have another rarisim power but i don't know what does
she const in.Your powers may be flying,making spells and your deosebit power,but you will discover it when you will be
ready.I will help you with your powers,you must learn to control them.
They prepared themselves 3 months.Mark could control his power but Jane had some problems and so she was trained
for another 3 weeks.Now she could control her powers very well;she could make magic tricks easily.She changed a lot:
still weared in black but she is more taller,her hair is much longer and even her character changed...she was like...no she was a slayer....

***astept critici...bye bye ******** :-D